MY FIRST DAY AT DAY CARE
By Francesca the Coonhound
One day on the way to the post office, we stopped in to a very interesting building. In the building were many dogs. Big dogs and little dogs. And, there were people too.
We visited and then I was signed up for Day Care. It is a lot like pre-school.
On my first day I was barely out of bed and Cinnamon's owner walked me several blocks to the building with the dogs. It is named "A Dogs' Best Friend."
I went inside and they took me to the back room where I waited for the other dogs to get there. I was very excited as each one came in. I played and played.
We had a lunch break and I got lunch and a nap. But I kept one eye open to watch the other dogs.
In the afternoon it was hot so we got misted with water out in the play yard. I played and played.
About 5:30 Cinnamon's owner came to get me. I got a treat in the lobby and then walked home with her. I was pretty tired.
|I think this is why they enrolled me in Day Care.|
Once I got home, Cinnamon was there to greet me at the door. We had some dinner and then lazed around most of the evening. Cinnamon said she got a good rest while I was at Day Care and wished I would go more often.
So that is the story of my first day at Day Care. I can't wait to go back.
Editor's Note: I've graded this essay as a C. That's a pretty good start. She got the high mark for correct spelling. I marked her down for lack of descriptive phrases and repetition. Also, I'll have to teach her to use big words like I, Cinnamon, do!